This story is fairly amazing, as far as content goes. Read about it here.
I would totally punch a shark for my Chihuahua, Lola, pictured at left. Or at least I'd really want to. What a brave guy!
As for the writing-- "Noooooo" definitely describes how I'm sure he reacted and how he was feeling, but it just looks kind of funny with all of the italicized o's. And I could have done without the description of his skin "hanging like ribbons." But it's very descriptive.
Another question I had was why the terrier was described as 28-months old. Wouldn't 2 years have been appropriate?
I can't be too harsh, though, because it was a very heartwarming story and I'm sure I make MUCH worse mistakes all the time.
I am very proud of LeNoir.
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